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Something broke today.
Something small and precious, a glass flower, a snowflake, a heart. Something untouchable for its fragility, something broken much to easily, never to be healed again. It made no sound, no dying screams or pitiful whimpers, its passing was slow and barely noticed, noted only by outsiders with jaded eyes. It's gone now, spirited away and never to be seen again. Earlier and earlier it breaks, shatters, and falls away spreading itself across the floor and cutting the feet of everyone who walks upon it, unaware of the blood pouring from their bodies, slicking the shards and staining pure white red.
Something broke today.
It breaks everyday to be honest, many many times by many many people, simultaneously across the world. It does not matter what they were before It breaks, but after they are soldiers, watching the light fade to darkness and unable to do anything but watch with ancient eyes. It's difficult for these jaded soldiers to remember what life was like before it broke, when the world was bright and whole and the sun shone every day and there was always a reason to smile. It is so very difficult to remember what was lost, to remember what life was like, before the breaking. The memories become smudged so very quickly, seen through older eyes, and the precious simplicity of these halcyon days is cracked and blurred until the memories either break or fade away. There's no going back after this point, sometimes broken things just can't be fixed, sometimes they're meant to remain broken, and the world is sometimes better for it in the end. But that doesn't make it any less sad.
Something broke today.
The children became adults, but no one can remember just when this occurred, they only notice after it happens, after the bowing, the straining, and the cracking under pressure until it finally breaks and shatters across the floor under the weight of the world. When does it happen? When does a child become an adult, jaded eyes smearing memories with bitterness and so-called wisdom until they either break or fade away? When did the world turn its back just long enough for the children to grow jaded eyes? Is there an age, a fixed point in time that declares that the breaking must occur? Is there a rite of passage, unspoken and unknown but acknowledged all the same? And the soldier march on, over the glass shards of something precious broken and with bloodied bare feet they trample the bodies of their former lives as children. But when, when does this happen? Why?
Something broke today.
It broke, and with the broken pieces we build again. Creating cities and people and walls higher then the heavens to keep people out with the bloodied shard of something broken. Higher and higher the walls go, until the city and its people are enclosed completely within a dome of bloody glass. The glass city become larger, and the glass people become wiser and nothing ever gets out and no one ever comes in. Life created from the shards of something broken, recreated as something safer and wiser, more weary of people then before. The walls become higher and thicker with time, and the blood stains crust and brown until they become the dirt beneath the feet of the glass citizens of the glass city inside the bloody glass walls. And all this is because something broke and shattered and soldier shredded their bare feet over the shards in proffered penance, their blood becoming the glue that holds the glass dome that protects the glass city and its people together. Because fragile things are never treated with the tenderness they deserve.
And then innocence shatters.
Something small and precious, a glass flower, a snowflake, a heart. Something untouchable for its fragility, something broken much to easily, never to be healed again. It made no sound, no dying screams or pitiful whimpers, its passing was slow and barely noticed, noted only by outsiders with jaded eyes. It's gone now, spirited away and never to be seen again. Earlier and earlier it breaks, shatters, and falls away spreading itself across the floor and cutting the feet of everyone who walks upon it, unaware of the blood pouring from their bodies, slicking the shards and staining pure white red.
Something broke today.
It breaks everyday to be honest, many many times by many many people, simultaneously across the world. It does not matter what they were before It breaks, but after they are soldiers, watching the light fade to darkness and unable to do anything but watch with ancient eyes. It's difficult for these jaded soldiers to remember what life was like before it broke, when the world was bright and whole and the sun shone every day and there was always a reason to smile. It is so very difficult to remember what was lost, to remember what life was like, before the breaking. The memories become smudged so very quickly, seen through older eyes, and the precious simplicity of these halcyon days is cracked and blurred until the memories either break or fade away. There's no going back after this point, sometimes broken things just can't be fixed, sometimes they're meant to remain broken, and the world is sometimes better for it in the end. But that doesn't make it any less sad.
Something broke today.
The children became adults, but no one can remember just when this occurred, they only notice after it happens, after the bowing, the straining, and the cracking under pressure until it finally breaks and shatters across the floor under the weight of the world. When does it happen? When does a child become an adult, jaded eyes smearing memories with bitterness and so-called wisdom until they either break or fade away? When did the world turn its back just long enough for the children to grow jaded eyes? Is there an age, a fixed point in time that declares that the breaking must occur? Is there a rite of passage, unspoken and unknown but acknowledged all the same? And the soldier march on, over the glass shards of something precious broken and with bloodied bare feet they trample the bodies of their former lives as children. But when, when does this happen? Why?
Something broke today.
It broke, and with the broken pieces we build again. Creating cities and people and walls higher then the heavens to keep people out with the bloodied shard of something broken. Higher and higher the walls go, until the city and its people are enclosed completely within a dome of bloody glass. The glass city become larger, and the glass people become wiser and nothing ever gets out and no one ever comes in. Life created from the shards of something broken, recreated as something safer and wiser, more weary of people then before. The walls become higher and thicker with time, and the blood stains crust and brown until they become the dirt beneath the feet of the glass citizens of the glass city inside the bloody glass walls. And all this is because something broke and shattered and soldier shredded their bare feet over the shards in proffered penance, their blood becoming the glue that holds the glass dome that protects the glass city and its people together. Because fragile things are never treated with the tenderness they deserve.
And then innocence shatters.
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Appassionata
Claire does not find him at his funeral.
Dean's body lies in an open casket, face-up with soft wrinkles and loose muscles. There is nothing of her husband in this corpse. He was rough and jagged. It seems wrong to see his edges smoothed down.
She hovers over his body and feigns sorrow. She hears family and friends weep and whisper comfort into each others' ears behind her. They offer their words and shoulders to her and she nods politely and pretends to cry.
All the while, she traces the ring on her finger and does not flinch when the diamond cuts into skin.
Claire looks for her husband. It is exhausting, but she has time.
In the rooms o
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Older
Time is a lonely bastard child. I know
how it feels.
I explore the spaces inside, moist hollows
where the angels once worked
their mischief. Strange
what you can grow accustomed to. I probe
the old scar tissue: smooth, numb
in places. I imagine I can feel
their shades, tactile afterimages: a zombie
reflex, a longing
for a longing. It pulls
at the center of my chest.
I miss the certainty of need.
I examine new possibilities, take
steps, show interest, craft a proposition,
cut a book deal. I have always been honest,
good
for others, even at my worst. I read. I write.
I observe, offer advice. Business is easy
to come by.
I have my way with w
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things i've yet to tell you.
i. last night i woke up just in time
to pronounce myself dead.
i figured, at the very least
i deserve to say it first.
i figure i've earned that much.
instant death- or
death in an instant-
allegedly painless.
they try to tell you
earnestly
"she never felt a thing"
ii. ryan,
remember that
your heart beats until it doe
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I really hate the literature categories, why can't there be one that says brain vomit or something? Because that's honestly what this is, and it honestly how I see things, but the categories just don't fit my head most of the time.
Questions:
-Did you know what broke before the last line?
-Did the metaphors make sense?
-Is the repetition effective or is it overdone?
-What was your favorite line?
Questions:
-Did you know what broke before the last line?
-Did the metaphors make sense?
-Is the repetition effective or is it overdone?
-What was your favorite line?
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This is fantastic. I feel like it's a really true reflection of society today in parts, as well as of childhood.
I guessed from "the children become adults" bit that it was childhood innocence that was breaking. I even feel like you could probably take the last line out and it would still have impact – you don't necessarily need to mention the fact that it's innocence – but up to you. (:
I really, really like the glass city bit. It's so true as well – my favourite line is probably "the glass people become wiser and nothing ever gets out and no one ever comes in." Everything gets more insane and more complicated the older people/society gets, and eventually it has to crumble.
I like the idea of innocence shattering, and also like that you point out that it's impossible to know when it does. Because the segue into adulthood, or the loss of childhood innocence, isn't necessarily a sudden thing, but there can be one straw that breaks the camel's back, I guess.
Brilliantly done.
I guessed from "the children become adults" bit that it was childhood innocence that was breaking. I even feel like you could probably take the last line out and it would still have impact – you don't necessarily need to mention the fact that it's innocence – but up to you. (:
I really, really like the glass city bit. It's so true as well – my favourite line is probably "the glass people become wiser and nothing ever gets out and no one ever comes in." Everything gets more insane and more complicated the older people/society gets, and eventually it has to crumble.
I like the idea of innocence shattering, and also like that you point out that it's impossible to know when it does. Because the segue into adulthood, or the loss of childhood innocence, isn't necessarily a sudden thing, but there can be one straw that breaks the camel's back, I guess.
Brilliantly done.